Well, it’s done.
Extra, Extra!!
LNB has been brutally mutilated and slashed. My poor baby, it was for your own good…
Chapters 1 and 3 have been combined, as well as Chapter 2 and 4. Jess’s conversation was slashed and revised all over. It sounds so better to my ears at least. But I hated doing it too… That means, it looks like I’ve spent over a year just writing 7 chapters. Oh, yeah.
It’ll probably cause problems when people try to review the next couple of chapters, since ff.net still records it as nine chapters, but, I guess that’s the price I have to pay. 🙂
But now, I can devote all of my attention to the next two chapters. Whee!
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avidtvfan@livejournal says:
Julia, you’re too hard on yourself. It was really great before. I hope this isn’t wasted energy… I don’t know how many people will notice and go back and reread.
Anyway, the next two chapters being focused on sounds good! 🙂